I think this first draft is dull and boring but is a good bases as a start point to build on and change which i started in my second draft:
This draft is better as there is colour and I had developed the title more to make it more interesting but it's still very plan, empty. My final cover:
My final piece i think appeals better to my target audience because it's more interesting and stands out better than the original.
I think this is a really effective front cover, Sally. You communicate a kind of snaggledy rawness that I associate with the kind of music you have covered.
ReplyDeleteGreat design-thinking in the masthead and I love the way your model seems to be surrounded by flames. The 'horror' styling here is memorable.
I really like the editing of your picture Sally. You can see the transitions and alterations you've made to your front cover and I think the final product looks really proffesional.
ReplyDeleteThe theme you're going with; a guitar, chords, rock and angst, flow well throughout the magazine.
Good Job :) xx