
My first feature had my basic idea but wasn't very believable as a professional feature for a magazine. Second draft:

I started to get an idea of how i wanted the features layout to look like but i still wasn't sure about the colour or the empty spaces. Final Feature:

My final Feature is clear without being empty and eye catching to the readers i used the title to help design the page which i think was effective.
I think the improvments look really good and it makes the magazine look much better then what it did at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteI like the blood splats on the page. They are really different and make the genre of the magazine clear.
Nice work
:)